Literature Review – 2nd Draft
The original draft was sent through WritePoint, the UOP mechanics checker, and came back. I made the edits and issued the 2nd draft. As promised, I am attaching the draft for your enjoyment and thoughts. This is the single largest undertaking of my writing life. While this is highly personal to me, there is no room for delicate feelings regarding feedback. I’m sending this to people for there review and feedback. I truly want a great product.
One related note, this type of writing is not for pleasure reading or even slightly academic reading. The purpose is to capture and synthesize literature germane to the topic. As such, almost every sentence is cited. This is very different for me and thus, even more feedback is needed. You are all a valuable part of making me a better leader, thank you.
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Well, this is going to take me a couple of days
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[...] a stressful few months with my literature review draft, I needed to return to a hobby that kept my mind sharp and relaxed my spirit. Things have been [...]
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Dear Dr. Mike
I stumbled across your blog because i am developing the nation’s 1st bicycle safety curriculum for youth 8-14 years, based on blending experiential education (EE) (Dewey) and constructivism (Vygotsky and Piaget). Most bicycle safety curriculums lack time to practice and reflect. I’m at the beginning of the literature review. I’m researching constructivism and experiential education. I will use the information i uncover about EE and constructivism to develop a curriculum based on the Backwards by Design model.
It’s a little overwhelming, and just laying out here for you to read helps me organize my thoughts better. Thank you for your work and contribution. If you think you have any more suggestions I might want to consider, I’d be ever so grateful. I didn’t see your references cited? are they available? or do you have an annotated bib you would be willing to share. I don’t even know if that’s an appropriate question to ask. Please forgive me if it is inappropriate.
Thank you,
Dawn Groth
Anchorage AK
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woops! just opened the finished paper and see all the references cited! Looks like a gold mine to me! thank you!
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